Sunaki's story chap 2 p4

It's spelled 'address,' and in the 6th panel, I believe you meant to say 'You don't know how happy this makes me!'
I'm not entirely sure what you meant to put in the next panel...
And in the last panel using 'otherwise', while not incorrect, does make the sentence a bit awkward.

I am amazed you can do this, writing a comic in a foreign language is amazing! Certainly not something I could do, not easily. And I've fallen in love with your style!